This is what not rushing to get pictures done looks like. Top is what I did in a rush back in October 2014. I wanted to produce so many new illustrations for Hal-Con, that I just did sloppy work. Sorry to anyone who bought a print of the top! Bottom pic is what I am currently working on. I will probably finish her after the weekend. Freelance work comes first! Or this would have been done tonight. Anyways, just wanted to do a comparison!
I would suggest that you make the jawline further back. Placing the facial features on too straight vertical line can look kinda funky. Not as much as the first one, but something in between
Thank you. It has been bugging me, but I'm still working on this piece. So I will be fixing the jawline when I get back to it.